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A Crime of Murder
by ddustyrose | Jul 23 '08
Just how far would you go for a friend? This may be taking friendship beyond the norm.

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Re: stories on Epinions, who knew...not me (Reply to this comment)
by ddustyrose
Hey there,

Good idea and thanks. :)

Happy New Year,
Dusty
Dec 30 '08
3:18 pm PST

stories on Epinions, who knew...not me (Reply to this comment)
by leftrevolution
Thanks for sharing- you may want to also check out triggerstreet.com - Kevin Spacey's attempt for dissemination of new writers.
Enjoy,
Lefty
Dec 29 '08
7:14 am PST

Re: Hey (Reply to this comment)
by ddustyrose
Hi Stella,

Do you mean what the initials, JD, stand for? I suppose we can make them stand for whatever we want...James David...John Daniel...Jackson Dean...Jerry Dwayne...there are many possibilities. I honestly never thought to give JD an ordinary name. The JD just seemed to fit.

I hope you have a great Sunday and thanks for the r/r/c!
Dusty :)
Sep 07 '08
7:09 am PDT

Hey (Reply to this comment)
by vmadwop1
Great story, but I was wondering what went with JD? Stella
Sep 06 '08
6:47 pm PDT

Re: gotta tell ya' Dusty... (Reply to this comment)
by ddustyrose
I seem to have got lost in my own story and left some vital ingredients out. :) How right you are in your summation! *grin*

I think you give me too much credit for being able to expand on "anything." It's nice you think I can though.

There's a lot to be said for editing. This is something I absolutely loathe and as you can see from my blethering, I don't do it. Shame on me!

I suppose you could call me a sloppy kid who needs a maid to clean up behind her. LOL.

I do thank you for your encouraging words...who knows? The maid could arrive any day and start to work. :)

Dusty
Jul 31 '08
4:48 pm PDT

gotta tell ya' Dusty... (Reply to this comment)
by smorg
..ya've gotta expand this into a novel or something! :o) It's simply gripping! I figure the evidence wouldn't match Eliot's account (not enough blood at 'crime scene'), though I wonder if they couldn't have ruled it justifiable homicide (if they actually do believe the story)..

Anyhow... You've got to get on writing a suspense or two and don't forget to save a few first edition copies for your Eps fans!

Cheerio,
Smorgy :o)
Jul 30 '08
2:57 am PDT

Thanks......... (Reply to this comment)
by ddustyrose
Gael and Sue! :)

I decided to re-read it and Lordy, I found typo's along with a few other things.

Have a great weekend!

Dusty
Jul 25 '08
12:06 pm PDT

As always..... (Reply to this comment)
by millinocket
Love it!

Sue
Jul 24 '08
3:33 pm PDT

Very.... (Reply to this comment)
by gaelkm
.....well-written and suspenseful, Dusty!

~gael
Jul 24 '08
1:06 pm PDT