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Re: This needs...Great advice! (Reply to this comment)
by popsrocks,  in Hotels & Travel
Thank you so much for your input. As I stated to you earlier I will try very hard to keep up the quality of my reviews.
I do hope I have given more pertinent information and kept better focus.
Thanks again and if you ever go down to Islamorada try the Hampton Inn !!
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Aug 28 '02
1:55 pm PDT
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This needs... (Reply to this comment)
by jdhauer
...a bit more focus. While interesting, the information about the Hampton Inn in Homestead and your Key West hotel experiences doesn't add to, and in fact, detracts from your review.
When I read a hotel review, I'm looking for a few things: What's the room like? Is it clean? Modern? re-furbished? In need of something? How about the bathroom? Do I need to tote my own soap & shampoo? Can I eat there? Is there a free breakfast? What else is there to do at the hotel? How about parking? What are the staff like? Friendly? Indifferent? Rude? Did check-in/check out go okay? How's the lobby?
Another thing that would really help is to go through spell check (for example, you've misspelled Islamorada a couple of times including in the title) and be consistent - if you capitalize Florida Keys, don't say Florida keys in the next sentence.
I really think this can easily become a VH review - if you revise it, please let me know (my email address is on my profile page).
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Aug 28 '02
8:28 am PDT
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