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Re: Re: Hi (Reply to this comment)
by pearannoyed
You have vastly improved the readability of this review. I still think you have more detail to your plot summary than you really need, but I have updated my rating to VH.
I hope you continue to write reviews - especially in books :)
Amy
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Jul 08 '05
7:56 am PDT
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Re: Hi (Reply to this comment)
by bigcat76
Thank you for your helpful words. I've attempted to modify my review.
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Jul 07 '05
1:24 pm PDT
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Hi (Reply to this comment)
by pearannoyed
I found your review somewhat hard to follow since you have the plot summary as one large paragraph. Breaking it up to add some 'white space' would make it easier to read. Also, while the POV analysis is impressive, I don't know that it added anything to my feeling of whether this is a book I would enjoy.
Please let me know if you update this and I will gladly give it another look.
Amy
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Jul 07 '05
11:08 am PDT
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