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Terminator IV: The Album
by scar_zgb | Mar 11 '08
Pros: Production, cover can be pretty nice if you like mafioso rap, few decent songs
Cons: Prodigy--- flow, lazy performance, subject matter, repetitive, uninspired, fact that nobody believes him
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by bigd99999
Mentioning Jay-Z wont cause me to roll my eyes, but this review DOES make me hurt my eyes. Thankfully its fixable.
Your paragraph structure, grammar, and spelling need MAJOR work. You misspelled like 4 big words here, forgot the H on HNIC, and worst of all, the paragraphs are a big jumbled mess! It's like a bunch of little paragraphs grouped together. SPACE MAN! SPACE! You need to learn when to use "an" as opposed to "a".
The main thing though is the paragraph structure. I mean come on man, LOOK AT IT! Does any other respectful writer do that? Everything is all bunched up and out of order. There is no structure and while I did like that you stuck on topic and gave your opinion, the ONLY reason I'm reading this is as a favor for you because you asked me to. Otherwise, its VERY hard to read, not cause of the writing, but like I said, the structure and grammar issues. It looks amateurish.
What's up with the random movie comments? It adds nothing to this.
Fix the paragraph structure and e-mail me, and I'll rerate. You only got one shot though - I'm a busy man.
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Mar 12 '08
9:03 am PDT
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