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Re: Hello :) (Reply to this comment)
by sponkit
Thanks for the valuable comments. Have a nice day.
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Feb 05 '07
6:18 am PST
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Hello :) (Reply to this comment)
by lyoness913
Welcome to Epinions! I thought you did a very nice job of describing the plot and exactly what you did and didn't like. Keep on writing!
Summer :)
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Feb 04 '07
10:02 am PST
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by ssjakira1
Hi again! :)
Here are a few tips to nudge this review up to a Very Helpful:
I do not fully understand the plot explanation. I grasp that you do not want to spoil any of the book's goodies, but I don't understand how the couple suddenly got involved. Give us just a little more to tie everything together and I think you'll be good.
A good idea when writing reviews is to check your grammar. This way everything makes sense and you don't have to bother coming back to make any changes, hehe. Here is an example:
Strathmore had strange wish that he could have.
First, I have no idea who/what Strathmore is, as it was never mentioned before. Second, I have no idea what you want to say in this sentence, but I'm sure a few more words would make all the difference.
You have a great review here; a few touchups and it should be a Very Helpful one in no time!
If you make any changes, feel free to email me and let me know so I can come back to take a second look! :)
NT
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Feb 04 '07
9:44 am PST
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