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by basesurge
Hmm... looks like sentence #1 needs a comma.
And if the only word I mis-spell is Genere (which is itself misspelled, I wager) I'm happy.
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Mar 20 '05
11:13 am PST
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by WilliamJones
I've held off rating due to a number of grammatical problems with the first paragraph:
The fall tended to be from nuclear war but not always sometimes the disaster was environmental...
Don't get what you're saying here: not always sometimes?
This genra king of petered out...
Do you mean genre? Even so, I still don't get it. Possibly two typos here.
My point though is I shouldn't have to struggle to decipher what you mean. If you update I'll be happy to take another look provided you let me know (e-mail address on profile page).
-William
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Mar 17 '05
3:38 pm PST
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