|
 |
|
Comment |
Sorted by
Date Written |
sorry (Reply to this comment)
by susidee34
I was so confused after reading this review, I couldn't decide what I had just read. I wish I could explain that better, but I can't nor can I tell you how to change the review to make it easier because I know nothing about the movie.
Perhaps if you read some other movie reviews you could get an idea of the guidelines Epinions is looking for in a review. As well, try to include names of actors, director, writer, music, animation, etc.
As far as grammar and spelling, there are quite a few mistakes that could be easily fixed. As well, you should make breaks between paragraphs to make for easier reading.
I'm sorry to come down on you so hard but if you decide to edit this review, please email me the LINK to the review and I will revisit.
Thanks
Susi
|
Jun 14 '03 12:46 pm PDT
|
|
|
|