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by slim7117,  in Music
Thanks for taking the time to tell me what I can do to improve. I don't have that much extra time, but I am working on a Top 10 list, and I will take you other comments into consideration when writing future reviews.
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Oct 13 '07
1:20 pm PDT
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by chaostamer
Here's the deal, man.
I've read your reviews, and can tell that you have a lot of promise. I'd just like to make a couple suggestions:
1. Tidy up your formatting. Distinguish the songs with "quotation marks" around them, and make use of the bold and italic features for significant information (the album titles should be both bold and italicized to stand out). Also, run your reviews through a thorough spellchecker before you submit them. Why would anyone want to read your reviews if other people's are easier to read?
2. Diversify your reviews. I understand you're new; everyone needs to start somewhere. But try not to review in excess albums that countless users before you have reviewed. Or, if you do, make them stand out. Give the readers a damn good reason to choose your review over the others. Also, share your opinions. Feel free to write Top 10 Emcees/Albums/etc. lists. Just don't write a Top 10 Eminem Songs list. I have the market on that one, LOL.
3. Keep it up. I'd like to see you improving.
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Oct 06 '07
5:49 pm PDT
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